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More Detail Edit

As I do not know whether or not I can edit this, I would make a suggestion to the members of this wiki in adding a bit more detail in the pages regarding certain characters or pages. For example, I highly recommend describing Iorek Byrnison and Iofur Raknison's duel in greater detail on both their pages. After all, Iorek did trick Iofur into letting his guard down and litterally ripped off Iofur's jaw with a single swipe before snapping the other bear's neck. That detail is well-documented in the book. Marisa Coulter's page needs a full summary of her actions throughout all the books, as I noticed it is woefully incomplete. I hope you take note of my suggestions and I thank you for taking the time to read this. SaberrexStrongheart (talk) 06:50, May 30, 2017 (UTC)Saberrex Strongheart 

Hello Saberrex! Thank you for your suggestions for edits. At the moment, we're a small editing team so we don't always have time to add in all the details. With the highly-anticipated Book of Dust coming out later this year, a lot of our focus has been there, but we'll definitely take a look at improving some of the older articles. - Amyosaurus (profile|talk) 10:12, May 30, 2017 (UTC)